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Hanoipunk is an art series about the adventures of two characters - which was inspired by two famous Vietnamese poets in the past, performed by artist Tu Na. The blend of Vietnamese culture through steampunk style brings very unique and new works.
Sharing about creative ideas for works, artist Tu Na, from the University of Industrial Fine Arts said:
“It is probably a mixture of many different desires to come to a whole in both character and setting. It is about the kind of woman who has the beauty of smart, mischievous, modern; is about the intersection of new and old, familiar and strange, Vietnamese and foreign contexts. This series I tell about the adventures of two characters - which was inspired by two famous Vietnamese poets in the past. Every image I create just evokes the feeling of a certain character or work, they are separated from the rigidity of history.”Artist Tu Na
Personal page: facebook.com/artist.tu
We invite you to enjoy the #Hanoipunk art series from artist Tu Na:

#01
Her name is Thanh Quan. She likes to draw. She has a magic pen. When she paints, everything that isn't real becomes reality. To control her powers, she stopped drawing the eyes of things in her paintings.
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#02
After completing his work, Thanh Quan bid farewell to everyone in the village and set off for Hanoi. At that time, she found a tailor shop to embroider lotus flowers on her Bib.
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#03
Unfortunately after finishing her work, Thanh Quan realizes that she has lost her magic pen and paper somewhere. She tried to look around and ask people but to no avail. Fortunately, a Banh Mi seller told her that he saw a little girl pick them up and run to a nearby street.
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#04
Thanh Quan Finally Found The Girl Who Takes Her Magic Pen. It's Not Too Hard To Find Her. However, when the Girl was fiddling with the Pen, she accidentally discovered its magical properties and created a new creature to carry the crates of instant noodles for her. She agrees to return the pen to Thanh Quan on the condition that she receives a lot of food. Her name is Xuan Huong.
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#05
Miss Rong Plays Every Day Near The Beach Holding A Bottle of Heineken Then Falling To Sleep She Is So Charming Walking On The Sand No One Has Ever Handed A Ring To Her Hand
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